Posted: April 24th, 2025

Unit 6 DB: 2 responses to DB

 In response to your peers, please note the various viewpoints on feedback. Draw conclusions regarding the role of feedback in the learning process. 

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1. The feedback I have been receiving on my research paper has been instrumental, as I have
chosen to remain open-minded to it, regarding it as an opportunity for growth rather than as a
critique. I value the various perspectives and suggestions that encourage me to explore ideas I
might have missed or not contemplated on my own. My ability to perform in-depth research is
one of my significant strengths when it comes to creating a quality final project. On the other
hand, I see an opportunity for growth in refining the transitions that connect my paragraphs.

My experiences with organization and revision have taught me that a clearly structured paper, with
logical organization, can significantly improve the readability and impact of my research. As a
result, I developed a revision plan that started with analyzing the big picture and progressively
addressing the finer details (American Psychological Association, 2010). This strategy ensures that
my ideas are presented cohesively and that each section plays a vital role in supporting the overall
argument. Through this revision plan, I am able to refine the clarity of my paper, incorporate the
feedback provided, and ensure that it fulfills the necessary requirements and objectives of my
research.

Question for the class: What strategies have you used to revise and reorganize your research papers
effectively?

Resource

American Psychological Association. (2010). Publication manual of the american psychological
association (7th ed.). Washington, DC: American Psychological Association.

2. Hello Professor and Classmates,

What might be useful as you receive feedback? To have any advice as I integrate feedback on my
final project will improve my writing. Feedback frequently offers an array of help, for example,
evaluations, criticism, approval, and encouragement. A well-prepared paper encourages editors
and reviewers, as well as instructors in the case of student work, to view authors’ work as
professional. (APA 2020)

What roles do organization and revising play in your own experiences? Organization plays a
significant role in my process by completing my literature review. It keeps the information I have
researched neatly listed, to effectively complete my project. Revision is a key element that allows
me to re-see my work from a new perspective. It also helps me see the relevance, theme, and
methodology of the paper, after it has been drafted.

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What are your strengths and growths in creating a quality, final paper? My strengths and growth
areas are the ability to approach resources in different ways, for example, accessing medical
journals or peer review articles, and combining subtopics with overlapped topics by complimenting
one another.

Question: What advice do you give for trying to shorten sentences? I find I am having difficulties
with the lengths of my paragraphs.

American Psychological Association (2020) Publication manual of the American Pyschological
Association (7th ed). Washington DC:APA